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It's not that...

I'll never feel your lips against mine again,
'cause that's nothing big.

It's not that...

I'll never lay in your warm embrace,
'cause that's what blankets are for.

It's not that...

Sleeping is difficult,
'cause that'll change in time.

It's not that...

School is going terrible
'cause I got a new year ahead to fix that.

It's not that...

You'll never be there when I break down,
'cause I've got friends for that; best friends.

It's not that...

You'll never seem the same again,
'cause it's not like no one ever stays the same.

It's not that...

Were not friends anymore,
'cause what did I expect?

It's not that...

We'll never have another chance,
'cause other guys also deserve one too.

It's not that...

There are so many words left unsaid,
'cause after all, some things are better left unsaid.

What hurts the most...

Is the fact everything seemed perfect,
but now it's just turned into hell.

What hurts the most...

Is the fact I was in this fairytale,
and the ride back to reality wasn't what I imagined.

What hurts the most...

Was that I was in love,
and the whole "falling out" thing isn't exactly easy...
I was listening to What hurts the most by Cascada [link] . and well this was thought of...

enjoy! :)
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:iconjanustrooper:
JanusTrooper Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This really sums up all of my relationships bro.. It was.. touching ^-^
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Tanzani Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very touching <3

You should listen to the Rascall Flatts version of it, it will make you cry :'(
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wolfeexarfxarf Featured By Owner May 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is wonderful, and slightly goes with a situation I have.
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PirateHunter4ev Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student General Artist
Oh my god I know this was written cuz of a song but it sums up exactly how I felt after I got dumped. Its beautifully written too. Keep up at it. You'll be doing everyone a favor ;) :)
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KenzieLennon Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011
That's beautiful
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ClairesArt23 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011
Thats really good. i love poetry and i would have to say this is a fav of mine from an "unpublished author".
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GirlRox888 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011
Thanks. :) I'm really glad you liked it.
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myzukolove Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is really good and cept for some of the things that aren't gonna hurt it's basically what's happening to me
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GirlRox888 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011
I'm sorry. I'm sure everything will get better soon. :) glad you liked it though! :)
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myzukolove Featured By Owner May 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i hope it does
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VampireKissesGirl Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011
If you loved Cascada's version of the song, you should hear the original by Rascall Flatts (the music video by them is amazing). I guarantee that you will be moved.
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rocknrollheaven247 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
pure awesomeness!!! :) luv it!!!
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PrincessBlackRose Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009  Student Writer
i love this poem...
Good job! :heart:
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:icongirlrox888:
GirlRox888 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
thanks :)
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PrincessBlackRose Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2009  Student Writer
np~
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:iconhopeless-romantic123:
Wow, i was looking for something that fit what i was going through, and i found it!

Btw, i love the poem, im a good writer myself, and i would never have thought of that!
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GirlRox888 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2009
oh wow.. thanks :)
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:iconhopeless-romantic123:
lol, no problem
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MekaMouse Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2009  Student Writer
I love the rhythm of it.

It's very well paced and each one of the verses make an impact. Very well written :D
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GirlRox888 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2009
thank you! :D
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MekaMouse Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2009  Student Writer
welcome :D
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nikki23libra Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2009
That is AMAZING!
You are really good at poetry!
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GirlRox888 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2009
Thank you!!! :)
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nikki23libra Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2009
You're welcome :hug:
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Everything you put here strikes home like a blaze of fire and ice, because honestly, I've been here too many times not to recognize the truths of these thoughts. These hopes and ideas and the struggles of attempting to make yourself, as opposed to everybody else believe you.

LOVED the following lines:

"What hurts the most...

Is the fact I was in this fairytale,
and the ride back to reality wasn't what I imagined."


Excellent piece. Things will get easier. And that song is amazing, I love it.
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GirlRox888 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2009
Thanks! yeah that's one of my favorite lines.
and I know things will get easier.. it'll just take a little while..
lol I've always loved that song :)
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fly-high-butterfly14 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2009   Writer
I love the ending, so sweet. :heart:
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:icongirlrox888:
GirlRox888 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2009
thank you :)
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kecharakittie Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2009
i think the poem would be more powerful if there was only the last "What hurts the most" verse since you can really only have one "most." it also gives it a more final ending, instead of dragging it out for 3 verses. =)

other than that, i really liked this poem. ^^ you have amazing creativity. :D keep on writing!
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GirlRox888 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2009
that's a good suggestion but if I take it out it seems too weird and I like all three of the of them... but thanks for the suggestion :)

and thank you! I will :)
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kecharakittie Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2009
=)
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kecharakittie Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2009
awwww
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:icongirlrox888:
GirlRox888 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2009
I know :)
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