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It's not that...

I'll never feel your lips against mine again,
'cause that's nothing big.

It's not that...

I'll never lay in your warm embrace,
'cause that's what blankets are for.

It's not that...

Sleeping is difficult,
'cause that'll change in time.

It's not that...

School is going terrible
'cause I got a new year ahead to fix that.

It's not that...

You'll never be there when I break down,
'cause I've got friends for that; best friends.

It's not that...

You'll never seem the same again,
'cause it's not like no one ever stays the same.

It's not that...

Were not friends anymore,
'cause what did I expect?

It's not that...

We'll never have another chance,
'cause other guys also deserve one too.

It's not that...

There are so many words left unsaid,
'cause after all, some things are better left unsaid.

What hurts the most...

Is the fact everything seemed perfect,
but now it's just turned into hell.

What hurts the most...

Is the fact I was in this fairytale,
and the ride back to reality wasn't what I imagined.

What hurts the most...

Was that I was in love,
and the whole "falling out" thing isn't exactly easy...
I was listening to What hurts the most by Cascada [link] . and well this was thought of...

enjoy! :)
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JanusTrooper Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This really sums up all of my relationships bro.. It was.. touching ^-^
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Tanzani Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very touching <3

You should listen to the Rascall Flatts version of it, it will make you cry :'(
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wolfeexarfxarf Featured By Owner May 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is wonderful, and slightly goes with a situation I have.
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PirateHunter4ev Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student General Artist
Oh my god I know this was written cuz of a song but it sums up exactly how I felt after I got dumped. Its beautifully written too. Keep up at it. You'll be doing everyone a favor ;) :)
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KenzieLennon Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011
That's beautiful
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ClairesArt23 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011
Thats really good. i love poetry and i would have to say this is a fav of mine from an "unpublished author".
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GirlRox888 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011
Thanks. :) I'm really glad you liked it.
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myzukolove Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is really good and cept for some of the things that aren't gonna hurt it's basically what's happening to me
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GirlRox888 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011
I'm sorry. I'm sure everything will get better soon. :) glad you liked it though! :)
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myzukolove Featured By Owner May 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i hope it does
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