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The reason you can't cry

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The tears that are building in your eyes
That you want falling down your face

The anger that holds it all back
Keeping everything the same

The one little drop you want down your cheek
That one thing won't come

The sadness that lies deep in your eyes won't form tears
Cause it just can't seem to be sad enough

The anger that lies in your brain
Just wanting to explode

The anger over powering those sad tears your wanting for
Something you've been wanting for a while

Everything you think about and the will you have
Keeps those tears back

You know that
But you won't let them go

The true reason of why tears won't fall...
Its all cause you won't let it go

You won't let the anger go, so you can be calm
And the sadness comes so you can cry

You just got to realize
Your the reason you can't cry...
I'm trying to look at something through another persons eyes (if that makes any sense). I'm not sure if Ive gotten anywhere. :-(

But as you can see I still want to cry and sadly i can't. Maybe one tiny drop that won't even go down my face. :-( But that's every now and then. But as the writing says I'm the reason i can't cry (or that's what i think). Still trying to figure out why tears cant form. Getting no where! :-(

Please comment and tell me how i did and what i can improve on. Please!!!!! I'm trying to get better and open the kinds of writing i do. But i must hear what you all like and hate so i can improve. PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!

Thanks!!!!!!!!!
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SacredWingMaster's avatar
I liked it... I feel the same way, it's been several years since I've shed any tears at all. I may be the reason, like you said in your poem, but I truly couldn't find a way to let it flow, much less avoiding it turning into anger depending on what it is...

One thing that crossed my mind, loneliness. It may sound obvious but really it's not. Could be something to consider adding to this if you want. But really thanks, I've been searching for a poem like this.