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The tears that are building in your eyes
That you want falling down your face

The anger that holds it all back
Keeping everything the same

The one little drop you want down your cheek
That one thing won't come

The sadness that lies deep in your eyes won't form tears
Cause it just can't seem to be sad enough

The anger that lies in your brain
Just wanting to explode

The anger over powering those sad tears your wanting for
Something you've been wanting for a while

Everything you think about and the will you have
Keeps those tears back

You know that
But you won't let them go

The true reason of why tears won't fall...
Its all cause you won't let it go

You won't let the anger go, so you can be calm
And the sadness comes so you can cry

You just got to realize
Your the reason you can't cry...
I'm trying to look at something through another persons eyes (if that makes any sense). I'm not sure if Ive gotten anywhere. :-(

But as you can see I still want to cry and sadly i can't. Maybe one tiny drop that won't even go down my face. :-( But that's every now and then. But as the writing says I'm the reason i can't cry (or that's what i think). Still trying to figure out why tears cant form. Getting no where! :-(

Please comment and tell me how i did and what i can improve on. Please!!!!! I'm trying to get better and open the kinds of writing i do. But i must hear what you all like and hate so i can improve. PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!

Thanks!!!!!!!!!
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SacredWingMaster Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
I liked it... I feel the same way, it's been several years since I've shed any tears at all. I may be the reason, like you said in your poem, but I truly couldn't find a way to let it flow, much less avoiding it turning into anger depending on what it is...

One thing that crossed my mind, loneliness. It may sound obvious but really it's not. Could be something to consider adding to this if you want. But really thanks, I've been searching for a poem like this.
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Morgo95 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
wow, you only cry a tear every once in a while? your very lucky to not have a sadness so immense you cry every night... I like this poem a lot, well written.
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GirlRox888 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2009
At the time when I wrote this I did only cry a tear every once in a while but now not so much... I'm glad you liked the poem though :)
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Morgo95 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
what do you mean "not so much"? like, you cry a lot now?
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GirlRox888 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2009
well, I certainly cry more than I did before. I wouldn't say I cry a lot... but enough to say that it isn't like it was when I wrote the poem.
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Morgo95 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
huh... well, crying is never good, no matter how much so :hug: that should make it better... jk! but I believe hugs are always good
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GirlRox888 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2009
lol yes, yes they are :)
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Simple-Photo Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2009
wow, that is so true for me. I couldn't cry because of my anger and fear telling to hold it back and it was me holding it back.

Reading your poem made me cried which I haven't done in years. I feel like a heavy weight have been taken of me.

Your words means so much to me, They are helping me to let out my sadness.

Thank you
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GirlRox888 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2009
oh wow I'm sorry you couldn't cry before... but I'm glad you can now... and your very welcome!!! :-)
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Simple-Photo Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2009
well I couldn't cry before because of fear, but I can now so thank you very much :)
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